Monday, September 20, 2010

oreo's

      I love oreos, I love eating all the suculent nector that lies between the two crispy chocolate cookies. I love puting the two cookies together and dipping them into the rich milk. I love eating the soft saturated cookies, and I love the deliciuos tast. I love looking at my stack of oreos and asureing that there will be more when o polish of the first one. I love slowy devowering the all mighty oreo.

      I hate it when im not allowed to have any have any of my precious oreos. I hate it when after i stuff my face i have to drink all the milk and wash away the belovid taste. I hate it most when there is no more left and i must wait for the next box to arive.

      But somthing good dose not stay good forever....
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6 comments:

  1. rassberryloverSeptember 20, 2010 at 2:54 PM

    thay was a really good piece of writing but maybe you should describe the oreo abit more

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  2. roxoraSeptember 20, 2010 at 2:59 PM

    powerful writing just ....... amzing ...... but you should write a bit more

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  3. yourbestfriendSeptember 22, 2010 at 1:19 PM

    I LOVE OREOS TOO. :)

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  4. Writing and StuffSeptember 22, 2010 at 1:24 PM

    good but most of your sentences started with I love or I hate. Good description I like 'suculent nector that lies between the two crispy chocolate cookies' other wise, just soome spelling and grammar.

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  5. TheBCBloggerSeptember 22, 2010 at 1:27 PM

    nice job!!!! could use a bit more description though.

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  6. funkyfeatherSeptember 22, 2010 at 1:42 PM

    awesome story great discription

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